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Deep in space there is a place you can only dream of.....
This is my latest Celestial Art attempt. IMO it is alot better then the old stuff I used to have before my big "deletion" Took me about 2 hrs for the scene and alot more time for the planet texture I may redo how the smaller planets are placed. I need constructive ctriticism on how to make those look like they fit and add more depth If you like this then be sure to check out my planet tutorial [link] AND view my other work Comments
Very nice
-- Founder of ~MechWarriorsClub Proud member of ~3d-studio-max Member of ~Dominators-R-Us ---------------------------------------------------- It was pitch black and very dark, and to make things worse....there were no lights... Did you just use one brush for the stars? It looks so repetitive and bleh
The lower left planet's shading isn't right, it should be more fading instead of an abrupt stop of light. The big main planet on the right side is weird looking, it looks as if it's al city lights or something That explosion thing I don't understand why it has that ring around it and the explosion thing doesn't add any oomf to it, it just seems as if it's taking up space because it's just a blue ball, not anything totally awe inspiring. The border was a bad choice Sorry for being mean. -- New account: =dKDan ★ ID provides Programming Tutorials and articles for developers. Join our Forums for engineers and programmers! -- Urban Planet/space art tutorial [link] We are Legion. We do not Forgive. We do not Forget. Also. The Stars were NOT one brush. I would not make so stupid of a mistake
-- Urban Planet/space art tutorial [link] We are Legion. We do not Forgive. We do not Forget. I don't believe it is where the smaller planets are located as much as the entire right half of the imgae under the large planet seems empty. Adding something there would make the piece feel complete.
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June 21, 2006
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